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Good stuff, Patrick. I think it could use a little tightening, but the story is compelling so far. Looking forward to more!

You've definitely got a good story here, Patrick. I'm so glad you're sharing parts on your blog with us. I look forward to reading more when you're ready.

I am working on the beginning, started revising and editing, although this part is raw, just like I wrote it a long time ago. More to come, so much more to come.

You're setting an interesting mood here. I also get a definite sense of there being a lot going on, which is a good thing, in my opinion.

I need some of that powder!

@Vange ~ herbal mixture of white willow, feverfew, rosemary, and a pinch of belladonna..(contact your local herbalist and be careful!) or excedrin migraine-that works pretty well.

@Jim ~ it is often a dark story

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